[Zen]

Story easily had the better of the two verses in this battle. The first half of Story's verse wasn't written spectacularly, but it read easy and I enjoyed it. In the second half it seemed like you were trying to do a bit too much and you lost me there. Cool piece though for the most part.

Greed, I edited out all of the reasons why this was bad because I typed them before I had a cigarette and I was too mean. This was bad though, and I think you know that.

V/Storyteller