Alright Daryll. It's tomorrow. It came, just like I told you it would. Here's your feed:
This was fun! The paragraph style suited the deliberately rambling tone of it well. The rhyming was stellar. A lot of different schemes layered thickly and seamlessly over one another. Like a tapestry of rhyming. The content stayed true to the central theme and didn't go too far off course, which can be a problem with some of these types of verses. It wasn't anything ground breaking content-wise, but that wasn't really the point - it was amazing rhyme-wise. Favourite line:
going coast to coast looking for the grossest hoes in six cities with big titties to motorboat
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