Certain
the middle part of your verse was great for me, drown your sorrows down, i felt you got better as the verse went on and the whole read got smoother, thought u had a stroke at one point when talking out the side of your mouth, the whole drug thing i feel like i seen it before, it wasnt the most creavity way to go with the topic imo but it was pretty much done to perfection
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this read so easy, rhyming was on point, vocabulary was maybe a bit lacking and wasn't as the same standard as certain, I like the ending but I dunno I wasn't crazy about it, felt certain maybe told a better story yours had a better twist, definely better twist but as a whole I preferred certain drop
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