CK.
thought you did an excellent job with the verse..this was the actually the fist the verse i read so ive read them a couple of times now
frst tiem around i felt like you lacked a bit as far as the flow and overasll progression of the story..technically you kept it fresh through
out. as i read it again it i felt like it grew on me..you concept your scheme started to come through a bit more...great stuff tbh..
witty
man this was doe as fuck..like CK's piece i read your piece a couple times as well...and each time it was the same..the impact
never changed or diminish every time i read it...i felt like your concept and storytelling ability really shined through..great vivid
imagery through out the entire piece...
overall
i got witty on this one i thought his imagery was on fucking pooint and i felt like his piece ept me interested for longer..
great battle though..thanks for the read fellas.
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