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Objective · 04-10-2013, 12:56 AM

@Innovator: ''grammar error and puntuation from both..so its not like either had an advantage in that aspect of the battle.''

I would really appreciate it if you could point them out and explain to me why/what is wrong. I didn't really pay much attention in school (wish I could go back in time and slap myself for that), and I lack the ability to write well when it comes to things like this. People seem to mention that the grammar errors are there but I'm having a hard time figuring out when I'm fucking up and when I don't.

04-10-2013, 12:56 AM	#4
Objective ( ͡º ͜ʖ ͡º) Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,868 Battle Record: 17-32 Rep Power: 52474192	@Innovator: ''grammar error and puntuation from both..so its not like either had an advantage in that aspect of the battle.'' I would really appreciate it if you could point them out and explain to me why/what is wrong. I didn't really pay much attention in school (wish I could go back in time and slap myself for that), and I lack the ability to write well when it comes to things like this. People seem to mention that the grammar errors are there but I'm having a hard time figuring out when I'm fucking up and when I don't.