man this was some amaing storytelling going on here...both writers dropped pieces that just blocked everything type when
i was reading them..the depth you guys showcased is just amazing.mechanically no complaints as far as astory and concept from
each of you. i appreicate the contrast between your styles i find you guys to be one of the few original writers here aside from black
and vulgar. anyway....ZY man your word just is impecable man..i mean just some great rhyming, word choice, flow, scheme, complexity
and top of all that the story was compelling and it cpatured some great imagery that had me reading intentively. Frank same as well
the usuall dopeness from you tho...lol that shit there flowed some some butter on a warm piece of bread. he had a interesting take on the
topic and i thought his take was prolly winning factor for me..in the end frank equal'd ZY lyricism and also had a had great story with some
dope as character development...FRANK.
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