I liked both verses tbh...
kannon - I don't think I've ever read anythin' of yours, and yeah I was impressed by what you dropped here.Thought the start of your verse was the strongest...sorta drifted a little after that though, the first half had some really nice content and flow wise it was solid...second half was ok, unfortunately for you my friend your goin' against a beast.
Vulgar - Imagery was great man...and like SPITZ has already said your endin' was dope.Always admire the way you incorporate vocab so it's complex yet the content isn't so over a persons head that they fail to catch it...this was a really good read.
My vote is for Vulgar.
Stay upwards people.
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