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Originally Posted by Greed
@ kannon the verse was loosley based on the movie. And the wife didn't know who she was she was just that jealous of another woman.
For some reason I thought this was like last week and the limit was 16, I went 18, but cut a lot to make it short. Probably was unclear looking back on it. |
the line limit has never been 16 bars in AOWL.
but my point stands. if the guy knew that his sister was the one who was just murdered (and he had to know about it at some point if he wrote it down), what changed that made him okay with it one night, and so not okay with it the next day that he killed his wife?
Either way, I hope you both take my vote as critique and not hate. I look for ways to grow through the feedback I receive, and I hope you guys do too.