Aesthetic. Stop freeposting. Anyways, I like ur concept. The wording and diction were mad lost on me this week. It just didnt come together as a whole, esp considering past verses. Ill quote things tmrw. Also mechanically undaring.
Obj. Not the most elegant plot arc. Smoother mechanics. Enjoyed how u framed the story in that era. I like ur developed works this felt rushed. Some cool quotes
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