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I honestly see this battle as a struggle tbr. Unborn u wrote nice on this but really overzealous with the vocal and sometimes it felt like u were placing them randomly or for show when the bar or stanza could have went smoother without it ya know. The length all in all is what I had an issue with cause it was user long with the length and it felt repetitive in a sense at times. Felt u were a tad overwhelmed with this week and felt sort of rushed then settled in and then rushed and then settled... very up and down. All together the verse stands great but a few things u would need look at in sense of writing at that length. Def u took the topic with a nice concept and idea but honestly I felt u were stuck.. The word choice felt forced here and there and the verse as a whole was up and down very confident but with loose ends to actually tie them in altogether. Half way thru u picked it up and kept the topic in mind and left it as so which was great.

Mvgt defiant for its completeness and more cleaner thought put together. Nice verse tho for unborn