zygote
Funny as hell man I love the concept.
Only problem I got with it is like how the computer's got emotions and the ending wasn't what I as the reader was hoping for. Was lookin for like the world ending Idk make it more computery if ya gonna rhyme about such a thing.
Frank
So sick sewing blankets professionally to using them as a bum; like damn frank you the champ. Only real problem I wanna just point, rhyme more; especially if you gonna call me out on it dog lol I mean you did it more then me but god damn exactly how you put it on my vote.
Sorry for the short vote gotta skeet skirt right quick
V/Frank
Fuck u split; frank didn't rhyme as much as he shoulda
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