dope battle. Kannon I liked your batman story but parts of it read bland to me. Think it needed a little more action being that it's about an orphan's revenge against batman bc batman killed his parents. THe writing was good but wasn't anything really spectacular. Vulgar really liked this verse. Dope creativity, incredible ending and concept pulled off pretty well. I thought the first few names were awesome but that ulugh beg shit was wack and eternity's tree seemed random and contrived. Other than that, you have yourself a verse that could contend with deadman's for VOTW.
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