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Old 11-14-2014, 02:38 AM   #22
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Packed Graves: LeBron James/King lines are played out. I didn't like Child Care much, either, because the follow through was so weak. That was a good concept to do something more with. Major Wright is on the Buccaneers, so that's an automatic miss and an embarrassing one. The skintag line was timely and decent. And the closer didn't work to me because Karaoke doesn't want to show anyone his picture.

King Karaoke: I don't think Packed Graves is Latino, so those lines are misses though I could understand the confusion. I also didn't like the opener much. In general, I'm not a big fan of using picture-specific disses in a non-picture battle. But the last two punchlines were the best of the battle pretty easily. I really like the swagger of the line abouto Knucklehead paying for pictures.

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