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Old 04-09-2013, 03:11 PM   #13
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Vulgar


What I seen best:

A ripe green Perrot composed fronds from date palms
human beings sat in their glasshouses, sold arms and napalm

Lichens. They breed with such persistence with no easing or a litmus
The blood of utopia was a kiwi sea breeze bleeding from the fringes

“Don’t you understand? The tree of life needs no penthouse.”
said the head architect to the landscape staff

In the dead of winter, every microsecond would last until…
Somehow hope sprung from the wreckage of daffodils

All I gotta say is work on being more direct; and address what your saying rather then like soooo abstract with big words, when those 2 mix its like

WHAAAATTT THEEE FUCCCK?



Ink


What I seen best:

We've siphoned the soil of life and chewed away the sky
With these iron claws we've mined away the fruit off all her vine

I run my fingers on it's cotton seams and ponder what the future brings
Of metallic beings and ancestry and the futility of what we've achieved


Really dope movie; I like the picture you painted but I feel like it reminded me wayyy too much of the film. I like what you did through the mans eyes though pretty cool idea.

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