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Old 04-09-2013, 03:11 PM   #5
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inspiring and honest. at least it had that feeling. provided any of this was non-fiction, kudos for putting it out there. i think we've all felt like this at some point. while on the other hand, we have the need to hear about other's problems to compare and mediate our own reactions to problems in our personal spheres..

i got a daughter thats physically incapable of laughing or talking
it saddens my heart every single day that i walk in
and see her face in her bed, my little autistic princess
i pause for a minute.. n wonder if she pays for the sins ive commited


see personal problems dont mean shit if their not your own

sort of calls it's personal nature into question..


the positive closer brought everything to a nice finale and created something almost motivating. it had power.


thanks for the read.



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