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Old 04-09-2013, 09:52 AM   #7
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It has a reflective quality that is great, perhaps many lines are exaggerated and hyperbole but there is every now and again that part of truth. You also show some humorous lines, E.g., "garage shut", "prank calling", "on couch". There is direct contrast to more serious lines E.g., the whole "sleep better" part. You reveal a strong multidimensional personality through these lines in combination.
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