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Originally Posted by Kin
We're Separate Levels, time to Wrestle, your move next
This match'll be 1 Fall..but it'll take 2 Story's to Do Plex
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I feel like if your name was plex this owuld be ok. I duno if thats ur alias or what. The wrestling aspect seem to be just thrown in there tho. I suppose it does tie in with separate levels, but something is missing here for me.
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Originally Posted by Storyteller
I'm fine with separate levels cus I got experience on this geek,
1 fall is true cus whose next in kin is in question once I lay him 6ft
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next of kin would have been the proper way to write this, but I kinda like the flip on separate levels / 6ft deep and 1 fall / next of kin
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Originally Posted by Storyteller
Ur bars are replicated from the past W/ horrid wording but u claim seperate
A fucking rip off of originals but what u expect from a haunting in kin etiquette
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Ok not bad. Concept was clever and overall the execution was decent.
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Originally Posted by Kin
Etiquette?? shiiiit...Kin bout to teach u how to be proper
Keep ya mouth Closed when its Full of bars Slouchin' in Posture
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I liked this rebuttal. The set up was worded nice, it just sounded edgy to me. The punch didn't follow the same tone, but it was still cool nonetheless.
This is a close match up. I liked kins rebuttal more, but I didn't really enjoy his opening punch. Story had a decent rebuttal and a decent punch. So for consistency I'ma have to go with story on this one.
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