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Old 11-11-2014, 12:29 AM   #1
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I read this when you first dropped and had feed but lost it
so here is the 2nd go around, you have added some element to your work
the way you flow has become very different since the beginning
The structure you bring through is often unmatched due to your unique expressions
for some reason I feel like there's a monk-ish presence emitting in your aura
somehow you bring out a more natural type of vibe from your verses
and as these battles continue you churn out some smooth work
nice job zyg....
I enjoyed the whole "You're" section on down
some interesting work coming out of you...keep it up
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