This was great, Its been awhile since I seen a greatly delivered paragraph formed verse
the rate in which you deliver each rhyme and progress is wonderful
BWA/Dull really brought this form to a whole and as most writers do carry it on
you take it and deliver such a swift flow between line and rhyme its truly amazing
then again I wouldnt expect anything less..you have come a long way since you first started here
progression shines through the more you drop, nice job Wit
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