Dominate- I liked this piece. It was pretty descriptive and I felt like I was watching a movie.
I just don't get why the protagonist had an epiphany after his beheading though. Tight drop for the bars alotted. Nice work.
Defiant- if this was about a soldier that killed his leader to take credit for ending the war, this badass. If not, its still good. I just think the story could've used a little less buildup and a more thorough ending, rather the conclusion crammed into the last two lines. Still was enjoyable though.
MVGT dom for a better written epic take on the topic.
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