hmm.. i had a tough time with this one.
j i liked ur idea about writing being ur love or whatever, i guess its been done before but it was still a pretty good idea, i just didn't think the execution was real great though.
certain urs was kinda pancakeish the way it was written. emo/poetic. ha
i think ur rhymes were a little more technical and smooth and i liked the imagery of describing what nyc is like now after all the bombing. was a cool contrast. i guess ur idea on the topic was just taking it literally like this is what its like now. seemed too direct from you. not that i dont like that, just really haven't seen you approach a topic so literally yet.
i gotta go with curtain on this one. i just think his writing was much stronger overall. mj i liked ur idea but im not sure i bought what it had to do with "the time is now" other than its time to write? i wish you woulda expanded/related to the topic a little more. idunno neither verse really blew me away in this battle. i think you've both got more to offer..
Vote : sir tin
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