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Old 11-09-2014, 04:46 PM   #7
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Cool battle bros, very entertaining.

NYC - I love how you use words, imperceptible grin would be a good example of what I mean, it's always nice to see people word things in a way that can make something that may have been cliched instead come across as original. This was a well thought out piece, I wasn't left feeling like it should have been shorter or longer, it was the perfect length imo the short verse format suits your style very well, enjoyed the verse, good shit man.

Copy - This was dope my friend, your flow is always effortless and you make your pieces open and available to anyone (your pieces are sluts brah!) which is something I love and try to promote as much as possible, there's no trying to figure out what is happening which leaves the reader free to enjoy the story and really roll with the rhyming, which was top notch as usual, your humour is always well received, you did your thing as usual here, props dood.

Gonna give this to CopyPat but it was closer than the votes make it seem.
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