Ok wow, shit, fuck me, well for a start I feel it would be offensive if I mentioned
flow and the usual mechanics, because im my opinion everyone in this league is always
on point. In fact im gonna copy n paste that because im sick of so many people voting
based off them reasons. anyway I digress.
Im going to base this off enjoyment which I feel seems to be a lack of judgement of
late, seen a lot of people vote based on flow which I always think Meh, flow is always
decent but aint the end all. anyway ok, had a few beers so if im spelling things wrong
then fucking shoot me, time to junmp in.
Pent - Gave off the feeling of a teen flick, beechhouse, good times the usual.
I loved the feel to it, made me pictue 'Friday the 13th' mixed with 'American Pie'
getting pissed but the ever threat was out there, I thought you portraited this very well
in you discriptions. Really made me feel like I was there, almost watching it, I also
found was a lot of 'tongue in cheek' lines, but ill admit made me smile and I thought
you did a great job of them, wasnt too much, wasnt too little. As a verse it kept me reading
and wanting more so I really did enjoy reading. Were a few lines I found a bit so called stretched
but lucky for you didnt bother me.The ending was a bit meh, seen the whole in your mind concept
done a lot, but yea as a whole I enjoyed, did what you had to made me read, was hoping for
more, as far as the ending went but yea, top piece seen you write better tho.
Red- Right im going to start off saying you are def an alias, weather you will say is up to you.
Im sorry but I found your first 2 bars akward, it really put me off on first read, I digress tho
(as i do lot, dont judge a book by its cover) So ok ive read your verse now, at first I thought you was
building up some big, massive machine, felt very akward tho but thats the impression I got, then
its a child which I feel is great but knowing that, I cant lie red, it bored me, your use of vocab
is fantastic but it really did bore me, dide keep my atention, weather thats coz im a thick cunt
I dont know, it just turned into an akward start, to a good build up, to a kid, sorry butm halfway
batween that it lost me, sorry just how I felt, great vocab tho.
Vote- Pent not been a cunt but won by far in my opinion, red would kick my arse if it means anything
but on this day pent by far.
and fuck off prob best vote ive done in a long time!
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