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Old 11-09-2014, 07:29 AM   #8
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Storyteller:

describing your station is sensational.. from out the gate..

Channel zero exclusive

But dilation

when your clock starts, nice..

so the chew out of the flower an people still growing even though it completely gets shit all over.. n everybody else.. I find it nice..

a lil bit of a cracker..

Zen:

We set sail last night following the moon, the palest light

The gulls overhead, and the orange sun greeted us this morning.

you got me twisted on your high seas sir.. Im enjoying your waves n im no black pearl myself..

He fell down onto the cabin floor; the ink slung on his coat

the way you catch the readers eye on one of the most simplest of actions.. was done real well..

this was a really poetic verse.. im proud to have read it..

vote = zenland

that ish was cool guys thanx for that jazz..
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