J, from the opening down until the potency line this was great. The Eden line especially stood out to me. It came off as effortless to you. The other half on the other hand I wasn't really feeling at all, and that really gave me a bad opinion of this verse. If you had closed this out as strong as you started, you would've been tough to beat this week.
Certain, you were the exact opposite of J this week. You started off slow and picked up as the verse went along, especially the ending. It built up but then it just ENDED. That made me think of a Paul Thomas Anderson movie, any of his movies really. I've seen better from you though, but you did enough to win this week.
V/Certain
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