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Old 11-08-2014, 05:20 PM   #4
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I read this last night high as FUCK and busted out laughing at Pat's verse. NYC's verse was cool and it was well written, but then I read Pat's and in my mind there was really no question as to had the better verse. Pat is the king of humorous topicals. The thing about it is though, while they're funny as fuck, they still are technically sound. Everything Pat writes flows effortlessly. Got me all jealous and shit. Fuck you, Pat.

Don't get me wrong, NYC. Just because I'm praising Pat this whole time doesn't mean your verse wasn't good because it was, it might've even been great. It just pales in comparison to Pat's. You could put that verse up against 99.9% of other verses and you'd fucking win. This week though, you went up against Patrick, and I think this just might be his year. Instant HOF Pat.

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