This is a great topic...
Dominate, the more I read your work the more I see the dedication to your verses
the way you start off the verse shows the way you can paint a picture
a very well painted picture in fact, you spend no time dilly dallying with mechanics
you seem ready for this verse and put down a very interesting tale, flow was smooth
and towards the end you kind of remind me of me...nice work
Defiant, I feel like you knew what you were aiming for as far as the verse goes
in fact who wouldn't? you portray a very well written story thats very adaptable
it focus' on the many things people are used to, but isn't to be looked over
it flows smoothly as well with the way the structure comes about, nice work
v/I really enjoyed both verses and felt like this topic was great
I think both of you really touched on this and it gave me good vibes
but then after reading through it once again, I realized my vote is done in vain
not meeting the deadline as planned or showing any...change as far as you two go
maybe it's because Defiant is in a different timezone..but I feel like...
I have to give this to Dominate by default...nice battle fella's
regardless of how I did the vote I still feel Dom edged it over on his opponent
so don't feel your late appearance has faultered you...it just makes my vote feel less illustrious now
nice battle fella's
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