Storyteller showed that it's difficult to tell a well-rounded story in 16 lines or less. His tale of a women's pregnancy left open ended questions and a lack of excitement. I didnt understand where the opening tied into the rest, and the Rose bit seemed forced. Great detail though. Zen came with sort of the opposite as his opponent, painting more of a vivid scene. This is a tough one to vote, I think I have to take the seagulls eye contact with the captain over a girl giving birth at home.
V. Zen
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