Soulstice - A character of many. A vanguard. Your stories are like the dark horse and the knight in shining armour. You are a connoisseur of crusades. The wording catches you off guard; but that spinarooni you do with the come back dribble is rare trait of the complexity age. The storys itself was not overly impactful on my life but I enjoyed the read. Sick read. You nailed the ending I thought. Creative stuff.
Couldn't grasp this perfect picture - what their feeling within
- Is being Watched by lurking figures with strange, ethereal limbs
Fear and his twin - Love; one dark and twisted with a legion of masks
A rubix cube of false faces - that all fiendishly laugh
Fear would randomly screech, a top-heavy freak that swayed in the wind
Viciously itching and scratching at the sable decay of his husk
A perfect foil to the sapient Love, and his irradiant skin
As both watched and waited for the Games to Begin..
The game of hearts is never won with a sudden, finishing blow
It's like constructing a fortress, brick-by-brick, building it slow
And after many winters of cold, and summers of sun
The twins had ceased their shadowing because someone had won
Love had decidedly come, into the lives of the two
Fear watches, perched on a clock tower 'neath the shine of the moon
But he knows better than any - emotions hostile disquiet
And that eternal love is almost an impossible triumph
So he watches in silence, mouths cracking smiles and smug
As his dark skin becomes irradiant, exactly like Love's
^this section was good.
Zenland.
Verse packed a punch for however many lines it was. You wrote this in a few minutes; Am I not right? One things for sure; if that T2K shit ever starts up you'll be champ of that shit no problem. Pressure cooker rhymes for days. Different type of skill set to achieve those moment verses. You are a versatile writer my brother. You can adapt to any style and make it your own. Sure fire. Can't quote nothing but the whole joint as a whole was quotable good job.
MVGT TopicalDood5 but its a photo finish
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