Corporeal sticks and stones, which cut flesh and break bones? That or,
Surreal plasma blast that trash thoughts to ash? Ha, now what's the matter?
other than the use of 'corporeal', i could definitely hear a trace of method man in this line. i mean, i read that shit in his voice. idk why. especially the 'ha, now whats the matter?'. this is why that was dope to me.
Don't go place claims on my name, not for depths nor Nirvana
There's no sleep for the wicked, so I'll rest when I wanna;
chill.
this was cool overall, i appreciated the wandering warrior type of vibe. you were compressing a lot into a bit of rather sloppy idea development. also, this read like something a bit too familiar for my taste.. i think you could use some more personality in your writing but this was not un-readable by any means.. respect
thanks man
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