yet once away in private
it's unveil the violence
you need to get onto your knees beneath a Lord and pray
that he not only keeps you warm and safe
^You are a stronger rhymer than people give you credit for here.
It wasn't a doozy, also wasn't a show stopper. I'm a big advocate of personal renaissances and pushing yourself to write something memorable if the right moments comes and we're spurred to write it all down. I think you somehow lost confidence in writing longer pieces along the way, maybe due to the death of RF? In any case, I'd like to see you play the violin of violence again for a considerable amount of time.
Keep it up Exis.
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