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Old 11-05-2014, 08:05 AM   #7
BROKE LESNAR
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- 1-2 Punch League

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im popeye after gulpin spinach. against hulk ur fuckin finished
My verse Dustin Rhodes so much that even Goldust'll give up his gimmick
- lotb
your a faggot in disguise. w/ interest in "hot guys"
but watch the mask come off when balls start flyin like catchers during pop flys
If he owe me even 20$? watch me flay him n network
ill make a couple calls n get Mines outta Country quicker than a Humanitarian Effort
- lotb
n your game is wack. desperation for pussy just aint right
you stay clingin to your x-wing like R2D2 during spaceflights
your verse is a bland ballad of ass. plus noones likin the meter
We'll Give u a Pat on the Back wen u Decide to Leave the Plain Behind like a skydiving procedure

vs.

a bitch'd be crazy to fuck u. just hearin that notion is tough
every bitch that'd screw Loose got more of those than Muff posts in a month
u get cheated on nonstop. i'll make sure that fact is heard
any time Booty call his girl she Blows him Off & proceeds to do that to hers
ur a fraud. NC is willin to prove that fact with a certainty
i keep it 100. you keep it 100 enough to be offered stacks of that currency
- lotb
his burial will be costly. he better pray there's no remorse
cuz if there is I'll Footloose the bill then do the Kevin Bacon on his corpse

*erased Loose Change bar, I wanted to keep that so it makes it 5-5.

Really dope battle. Best battle I've read so far. Loose had a cpl bars that suffered from having more emphasis on his second line than his first. The setups just came across as filler to get him through the bar until his punchline and that hurt. With Country I would say that his bars were complete from setup to closer and worded extremely well for maximum effect. My only gripe is that he didn't have enough lotb-esque haymakers. Loose had creativity in his favor while country had the better structured verse but if I go by lotb's I would give it to Loose.

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