Just now peeping this Nigma and I have to say I'm very impressed. I think zygote said this but your rhyme choice is always unexpected. You have a unique way with words and along with a unique style and you embrace it fully and that's what makes your pieces resonate very well. Top notch piece here. A few minor hiccups in terms of some lines being too wordy for my taste but I usually find that in almost anyone's verse I read lol. Great work here man.
Acid attacking growth from an enfant corroding decicion
Light of the cross shines an open window hopelessly driven
Aligning chakras minding good and evil, grow in the middle
I was taught by the author I should notice the symbols
^^^Really enjoyed this section.
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