Freak show, CSI, TLC, your bars came off a little choppy or rushed. Feel you could have had some haymakers with the nameplays just don't think you capitalized. Not a bad verse but decent showing.
Vs
Can't wait was nice, cobra, Silver thread, recognize a G, not a bad verse good mix of nameplays & current events. The recognize a G line was probably LOTB. Not much to critique really except wording could use a little help.
CreepShow
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