Opener was fire, current was decent flip, pop flys, x wing hahahaha, I liked this verse wording was clean & creative aspects. One of the better verses in the tournament so far. The misses weren't bad came off as light jabs he punches where nice though with 2 haymakers.
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Muffs post, booty call, loose change, footloose, you had some nice bars as well definitely a good verse here. Just some of your misses were bad & kind of hindered your verse.
Better consistency & overall verse = first guy
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