Wowzer.
pohfig: Amazing read here. From the opening lines I was hooked. Kind of a dark undertone throughout this piece with touches of humor (drinkin liquor at dawn I chuckled at haha). Great story that progressed nicely without once stuttering. Props on this one man.
Red glare: Another great drop from you again this week. You had the more superior rhyme scheme in this piece and you showcased that in the first few lines. Your word choices kept me hooked from the beginning to the end and it was an amazing verse truly. Props.
Well after reading poh's verse I thought there was no way he would lose this battle, but after reading Red's I was more impressed with his verse. My vote goes to Red but this will come down to the wire I think.
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