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Old 04-08-2013, 12:00 PM   #10
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Adonis: Excellent showing here this week. You're becoming one of my favorite writers here in the league. Taking the idea of mutants and adding it into the idea of evolution (since that's what it would have to be lol) would be expected to me but yours was somehow original and I think it was because this verse seemed different to me from your other pieces. This verse felt very poetic and even calming haha. Nice showing Adonis.
Nigma: You got your first battle!! Well this was a pretty dope concept in my opinion. Seemed like you took the movie idea and showed their real life counterparts that you've found....which makes you Professor X...But I digress lol. Really a great rhyme scheme and what I thought was a really dope concept. Nice Nigma.

All in all both guys came very well this week but I would have to go with Adonis like the rest of the voters. Adonis' poetic feel won my vote this week.
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