Your flow is excellent throughout this piece as usual with you, but this line in particular stuck out in a bad way:
remember us? the dirt between the cracks, the drug peddlers
^This line here really fucked up the flow for me. The previous three or four lines before it were great, but when it came to this one it just stopped and had to pick back up on the next line.
actually, this is what happens when we buy into the insanity
^Favorite line.
This piece didnt have as many standout bars as I'm used to from you, but all in all it was still much better than most of the om's out right now. Good stuff brah.
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