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Old 11-01-2014, 03:09 PM   #4
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This battle felt really good and really close

dead, your verse rolled off the tongue as I read it
the beginning of your verse was very smooth to me
and as always you know how to work in some great vocab
its impressive how you keep up the numerous syllables
weaving in and out the verse like some spectacular..
I have no idea...quilt maker..blanket me with more my friend

3Pa, I'm not quite sure who you are but have kept an eye on you
you also seem to captivate me as your verse continues on
the verse kept the same length as dead's as well as your vocab
you brought a strong verse and made this a tough choice

V/This battle is a very great match up in my eyes
its like looking into a mirror seeing the difference and the similarities
you both brought a great adaption to your piece
and really make it tough to vote, both are amazing in eyes
this was based on memorability......vote goes to 3pa
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