Tic knew all he really needed to do was formulate even the most basic of 1-2's here. ALTE, we don't write our 1 bars to beats, nor do we craft verses in that manner. All you have to do is tweak your style a bit and you have a foundation to work with. Saying everybody's flow is off is ridiculous. There's ba difference between audio and text. Kin is an audio guy and he can grasp this concept. Don't let your stubbornness ruin your writing.
v-Tic
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