[Adonis]

I thoroughly enjoyed copy's flow and scheme, zero complaints on that front. I also liked the concept of mother nature in sexual innuendo. Recurring. I did not like the shock value of certain. Flow, decent, patterning good. But the lack on non existence of climactic build up, was def, you went from "this is my sister, to she is being raped, tied to visual images, limbs and knots".

V/ Pat