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CopyPat · 10-26-2014, 08:07 PM

interesting battle.

zygote this seemed really weird from u. almost like it wasn't even you that wrote it. the use of the word faggot and some others etc just seemed STRANGE coming from u. i was NOT expecting this. the verse itself had lots of funny parts obviously and it had some good visuals and was interesting as a story but besides saying how gross Paris is i didn't really see the point of the verse as a whole...like once it finished it didn't feel complete.

MW this verse was just kinda boring dude. the writing itself in terms of flow and complexity was better than zygotes but the story was just not very interesting. the ending with a suicide didnt do it for me either.

idunno i think this is pretty close.both had their positives and negatives. i thought this pic was pretty cool but neither of u did anything too crazy with it. if im picking on whose take i liked better i gotta go with zygote. mike wrecka out rhymed u but ur story was much more enjoyable to read and way more interesting. also it isn't like ur writing was terrible it just wasn't Great.. the funniness was a plus too.

Vote: Zygote in a close one

10-26-2014, 08:07 PM	#9
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	interesting battle. zygote this seemed really weird from u. almost like it wasn't even you that wrote it. the use of the word faggot and some others etc just seemed STRANGE coming from u. i was NOT expecting this. the verse itself had lots of funny parts obviously and it had some good visuals and was interesting as a story but besides saying how gross Paris is i didn't really see the point of the verse as a whole...like once it finished it didn't feel complete. MW this verse was just kinda boring dude. the writing itself in terms of flow and complexity was better than zygotes but the story was just not very interesting. the ending with a suicide didnt do it for me either. idunno i think this is pretty close.both had their positives and negatives. i thought this pic was pretty cool but neither of u did anything too crazy with it. if im picking on whose take i liked better i gotta go with zygote. mike wrecka out rhymed u but ur story was much more enjoyable to read and way more interesting. also it isn't like ur writing was terrible it just wasn't Great.. the funniness was a plus too. Vote: Zygote in a close one __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.