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Old 10-26-2014, 03:31 PM   #7
Mr. J
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This was an interesting champ match
and a good one I might add

Copy, you brought about an easier form of the topic
twisted your concept into the piece and made it work quite well
your style complimented the usage of your multis and such
drawing a perfectly parallel to the topic at hand made it enjoyable
the flow of the piece was smooth...nice work

Certain, I'm not surprised in your concept at all..its different
as it always is but carries a certain edge to it as it progresses
the dialogue adds some character to the piece and draws a person in
you always seem to come through at the right moment and take it away
you never give it back either a well thought out piece my friend

V/Certain, his versatility just shines its an easy win
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