[PancakeBrah]

I think this is one of your better pieces. From intrapersonal scars onward, basically. I didn't quite the marker/joker cards line but aside from that everything was very fluid, smooth, like usual. It almost had a narrative to it, some forward momentum, while still being like your other pieces. Just a series of thoughts and images that coalesce into a picture or feeling, tied tightly together with the ending. Wording was top notch, as is the norm from you. I particularly liked the vulture, Descartes, apple juice, actually was, and paper mache couplets, but everything was of high quality. Thanks for the read.