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Old 10-24-2014, 08:06 PM   #9
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Say u can't stand my raps, they hurt you to read n I bet it does
Cause I'm a Golden Warrior throwing Bullets that go straight to ya Calfs like Kevin Love.
They're called Cavs, you're fucking retarded. Don't understand the rest, jus random basketball team references that have nothing to do with Kevin Love. Bullets aren't even called that anymore. The fuck.
You gon' pay for this beef, this that expensive shit..boars head
Ya girl'll get mad if we have to Paterson's pockets cause you comin with Shortbread.
LOL @ ...boars head. You corny as fuck. This was better, though.
Try ya hardest, I'll be sure to ask is this geek felt yet?
Bc only time you'll have metal clickin is if knuck yells "seat belt check!!"
You quoted that random post from someone not related to this battle at all for this...? Get the entire fuck out of here.
Dont get gassed round me, i'll discard u cause u hella hater n
Bullet holes'll have you stinking in awkward silence, like u farted on an elevator.
Why the fuck did you leave the 'n' on the first line instead of moving it over? I'm guessing because this shit is stretched as fuck and you STILL had to link the punch and the punchline with like. SMMFH.
Grab your head, thinking "this dude might win tonight"
BITCH U GUESSIN.. & youse right
Ass.

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ur a fragile pushover w/ the swag of a gutless twit
ice is basically meth..
..so it only takes 1 punch for this faggot to up n quit
Don't get the reference as I wasn't around, but guessing Meth quit over a punch in the 1-2 or something? Idk.
ur np's r a total disaster, he a dicksucking lame bet
so if icy flip a snowpiercer bar..it'll end in a big fucking trainwreck
Wtf? lol, stop it.
weiners alone at the bar slurping some cold booze
cuz snow plowed his girl n left ice salty as emergency road crews
This is better.
u loser, even ugly chicks hate this pipsqueak terror
while all the hot bitches respond to wei' game w/ a disc read error
Hate the linking from the first line to the second with 'while,' doesn't work. You were JUST talking about him, then you said 'while' for some random fucking reason when you're already fucking talking about him. Wtf are you even on, doe. Not only that, but you went from second person to third person in the same fucking line. Don't do that.
ur alias wont protect u, n ur too candid to bluff dick
cuz u post the same garbage every battle..attack of the muffs pic
Eh, this is alright. Don't know why you put the comma right before the 'n' there, but whatever.


Overall this battle wasn't that bad, I suppose. A lot of minor technical issues annoyed me and some of the lines from both made me go WTF, but I could see that there were some glimmers of someone considered half decent there. I'm guessing the second guy is the higher rated behind the mask, though. First guy had that Shortbread line that made me think he might be someone good, but the rest of his verse left much to be desired. Second guy was more consistent and thus wins this one.

/v chodepiercer
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