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Old 10-23-2014, 05:55 PM   #13
Mr. J
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This was an interesting piece, was this finished?
if not I wonder how that would come about..
it sucks being no showed I know the pain and it aches me
it feels like a dirty "win", anyway the verse is powerful
the topic is simple and easy to work with but the angles are there
and you approach this quite nice, hope your opponents show up in the future
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