musculoskeletal farce. a legend that we're told as a toddler
so we believe all along. mythical like stones of Gibraltar
psych ward, the overdosage forced in my palm
set me free like raven feathers or a company car
^^^
this was the start of a very interesting piece that rolled together
I enjoy the multitude of imagery and..dexterity in your rhymes
it blends together so nicely and shows your reason to be loved here
quite an eye catching piece, keep it up my dude
its a common misconception that we welcome mistakes
tell me of your prophecy and nail me to stakes
i'll forgive your heresy and wish you the best
while snake venom hisses down the back of your neck
^^
I enjoyed this near the end too...nice work
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