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YDK · 10-20-2014, 04:57 PM

i got muff taking this with a bit more personal punch. i liked the use of a past name play instead of all the played cert/sert plays lately and it had humerous imagery wit it so that was a bonus.
cert's was nice but felt kinda generic this week. for the name play itself it was nicely done but gunplay type bars have been done to death
v muff

10-20-2014, 04:57 PM	#11
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	i got muff taking this with a bit more personal punch. i liked the use of a past name play instead of all the played cert/sert plays lately and it had humerous imagery wit it so that was a bonus. cert's was nice but felt kinda generic this week. for the name play itself it was nicely done but gunplay type bars have been done to death v muff __________________ Last edited by YDK; 10-20-2014 at 06:17 PM.