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Split · 10-20-2014, 02:53 AM

Okay, so I wanna give you guys a vote but really don't have the attention span for this kind of battle.

Enjoyed both writers use of language and story progressions. Standout lines and techniques from each, notably sensory imagery from Buddha and the 5 45s line from listen. both had points of exceptional language use, but at the same time both abandoned lyricism to an extent for their plot. noticed this more in Listen. UB sometimes stretched rhymes a little too much & had too many syllables on occasion.

I had a preference for UB's narrative voice & attention to detail whereas Listen's dialogue seemed a little shaky, overall felt like UB had the more complete work

V/ UB

10-20-2014, 02:53 AM	#9
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899399	Okay, so I wanna give you guys a vote but really don't have the attention span for this kind of battle. Enjoyed both writers use of language and story progressions. Standout lines and techniques from each, notably sensory imagery from Buddha and the 5 45s line from listen. both had points of exceptional language use, but at the same time both abandoned lyricism to an extent for their plot. noticed this more in Listen. UB sometimes stretched rhymes a little too much & had too many syllables on occasion. I had a preference for UB's narrative voice & attention to detail whereas Listen's dialogue seemed a little shaky, overall felt like UB had the more complete work V/ UB __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com