[Cereal_Killa]

CopyPat:

Hey dude cool rhyme scheme, kinda simple straight forward.. No curves, no drops, swirls, purdy images or real serious metaphors.. The over all jazz is cool.. especially in the soft tone of dialogue used even with the abbreviations n wat not.. Kinda like your getting angry (completely aggressive/mad/obsessive etc) but calm which rocks.. I dare say you would have either thrown up a few miss spelt words / and or you just are truly fed up over it.. either way ish is dope, I speedballed through it so I didn’t clasp onto any.. love it none the less, nothing over the top and subtle.. nice drop dude..

Vulgar:

Rotten Wilers That We Are
We Mark Our Territory In More Than Blood

cool intro, even if it was/is a title ish is dope..

Next stanza OM fucken G whizz nigga..

The Stalin/Seinfeild switch is a huge bitch.. The jew/ the americanized stage prop with laughing track at the end.. I do so oh very like..

Here to me, even though I’ve got this nasty image of Seinfield in my head.. Your real gory, hatefilled back story doesn’t get lost in the overlay.. The dark disgust hits yet you hold comical patriotism for Americana.. all flava..

TBH you have already broken your own sci fi style, cause by now you usually hit into galaga.. leaven me moist but hells yeh I needed the flip..

or would kamikaze youths wag their tails with explosives
Yelping at the ghosts in the room like they were phantoms with holsters

nice boom – booo

an appetite for grim noir - scenes in stillborn scarlet

Now this my flava..

skinned aardvark
stillborn scarlet
hardship

Ima be real, the tip from the aardvark could have been ditched.. I had to drift too high that it stuck in my head as a negative……. sooooo regardless the still born is a brilliant splash then the cans missed in the next line but you roll the word hardship which keeps the still born line intact..

I don’t know each name you tapped on though you did cover the war torn pet to the extreme.. like imah on the field splashing in the blood..

If well trained Great Danes charged into Khmer Rouge
would it give way to our more animalistic, calmer roots?

if they were physically animals would it be easier to skin them alive and devour their future.. More then fitting sir..
Man this was crazy.. huge fan..

Vote = vulgarity

schweet match guys.. ty